Where did they come from?
Where did they go?
Questions to which answers,
No one seems to know.
Beautiful and gentle,
As much as a flower.
They soon disappeared,
Due to man's lust for power.
Only those now
As rare as sages.
Can truely find a dragon
In these modern ages.
Once these creatures
Where the protectors of us all.
Sheltering great civilizations
Until they disappeared, leaving them to fall.
Everyone I know
Is a dragon you see.
I look out for you,
You look out for me.
Dragons will be with us
Through the reaches of time.
In fact there's one sitting here,
Teaching me this rhyme.
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"Once these creatures
Where the protectors of us all.
Sheltering great civilizations
Until they disappeared, leaving them to fall."
The last line in this stanza was too long tho - it kinda ruined the flow.
"Everyone I know
Is a dragon you see.
I look out for you,
You look out for me."
I really like this stanza coz i think, when u hear someone calling other people drangons they usually mean it as an insult. good change!
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Whatever happened to Sex, Drugs & Rock'n'Roll?
Now all we have is AIDS, Crack and Tecno.
You know I thought the same thing about that when I wrote it. about the flow that is.
For some reason I couldn't get it the way I wanted so that was the end result.
I know I should be ashamed
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Education is what remains,
After what is learned,
Has been forgotten.
Even if it doesn't flow exactly right, it's still pretty awsome!
No one's (and nothing's) perfect right?
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Whatever happened to Sex, Drugs & Rock'n'Roll?
Now all we have is AIDS, Crack and Tecno.
"There are no perfect men in this world, only perfect intentions." --Robin Hood, Prince of Theives
I'm going to be posting a large poem sometime in teh next few days (or so is my intention) . It's the second part of one that I had published a few monthes ago. Hope you check back than. Comments are always welcome
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Education is what remains,
After what is learned,
Has been forgotten.
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Whatever happened to Sex, Drugs & Rock'n'Roll?
Now all we have is AIDS, Crack and Tecno.
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Whatever happened to Sex, Drugs & Rock'n'Roll?
Now all we have is AIDS, Crack and Tecno.
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check out my photographs at ~zero-again
The middle stanza about great civilisations is way to long and dominating however. Maybe you can split it into two smaller ones.
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Heal yourself - Hurt yourself - Judge yourself
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